2017/05/14

Mother's day

My children and husband gave me carnations as a Mother's day present.



I was really glad to receive them.

When we went shopping at the supermarket, my 8-year-old son suggested my husband to give it to me.

I didn't notice that they bought them at the flower shop because I went to different places in the supermarket apart from them.

I am really happy to be a mother, thanks to you!

Thank you(^o^) for reading this article!

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  1. Hello Kumi-san,

    I hope your Mother's Day was enjoyable and you were not overly busy and were able to relax a little.

    The flowers look amazing. It sounds as if your son and husband are very good at planning surprises.

    Here is a list of some of the issues found with the rest of the post:

    This line:
    I was really glad to receive it.

    Should be:
    I was really glad to receive them.

    Reason: Usually when getting a gift of flowers you generally use "them" rather than "it". I am not sure as to why. Your sentence as far as I can tell is still grammatically correct.

    This line:
    When we went shopping to the supermarket, my 6-year-old son suggested my husband to give it to me.

    Should be:
    When we went shopping at/in the supermarket, my 6-year-old son suggested my husband should give them to me.

    This line:
    I didn't notice that they bought it at the flower shop because I went to different places in the supermarket apart from them.

    Should be:
    I didn't notice that they bought them at the flower shop because I went to different places in the supermarket and was apart from them.

    This line:
    I am really happy because I could be a mother thanks to you!

    Should be:
    I am really happy to be a mother, thanks to you!

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    1. Thank you always, Terry!
      Opps! I found that I mistook my son's age!
      I also corrected it.

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